Dude you are cool.
Clarity is a tad cloudy...but I like it.
You need a drum program.
Intro is cool as fuck.
Also, when you decide to make this a full song, would you mind sending me all the tracks separated? I'd love to practice my mixing and mastering, while helping you out. Anyways, heres a 5 cause you are voted so loow.
5\m/